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Postby Sonic-ock » May 27th, 2010, 10:04 pm

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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby Sonic-ock » May 29th, 2010, 4:03 am

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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby Vitotamito » June 3rd, 2010, 11:46 am

Did you just begin a new Sketchbook? Lazy bum... ;)
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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby Jmontoya » June 6th, 2010, 1:25 am

Looks very familiar lol, nice!
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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby Sonic-ock » June 6th, 2010, 3:44 pm

Vitotamito wrote:Did you just begin a new Sketchbook? Lazy bum... ;)

You're such a scamp.

Jmontoya wrote:Looks very familiar lol, nice!

Thank ya!

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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby Sonic-ock » June 9th, 2010, 4:20 pm

I'm seriously about to just give up on this mess, it's not going at all how I want...
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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby Sonic-ock » June 10th, 2010, 8:11 pm

It'd be swell if some of you colorists out there could give me some critiques. I'm really trying to step up my coloring game.
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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby eishiya » June 10th, 2010, 8:30 pm

The actual colours are nice. The shading doesn't really show the form/bulk of the body; you're showing some muscle, but the overall figure still looks flat. Also, I can't tell where/what the light source is, which contributes to the flatness. The realistic-ish softness is a bit at odds with the cartoony lineart. That is very difficult to pull off but I hope that you will try it anyway. If it doesn't work for you, simplify.
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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby mosama » June 11th, 2010, 2:39 pm

Good thing u didnt give up on that piece, look how cool it came out!!
and i would give u color advice but i really suck at coloring and just started coloring like 4 days ago lmao
All i know is that it takes allot of practice so never get frustrated or stop doing what your doing, just keep doin it and improovments are bound to happen (which speakin of improovments you art has improved a hole bunch!)
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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby SuperBiasedMan » June 11th, 2010, 2:45 pm

eishiya wrote:The actual colours are nice. The shading doesn't really show the form/bulk of the body; you're showing some muscle, but the overall figure still looks flat. Also, I can't tell where/what the light source is, which contributes to the flatness. The realistic-ish softness is a bit at odds with the cartoony lineart. That is very difficult to pull off but I hope that you will try it anyway. If it doesn't work for you, simplify.


I agree with eishiya, I think something more like cel shading would suit this better and fit with your general style better. They also fit well with vectors, though they are much slower than regular shading to do, especially in fiddly little bits like on those knuckles. However it can be much bolder and stronger, which is how your lineart generally comes across, so it would work great.
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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby Sonic-ock » June 19th, 2010, 3:41 am

Eishiya: Thank you so much.

Momo: To our continued improvement dude.

SBM: I plan to do a lot of experimenting with both styles.

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Re: Lazy Bum

Postby Sonic-ock » June 27th, 2010, 4:49 am

For an OCT, may be a little racy.

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Re: Bandwagoning! (You ask=I draw)

Postby Sonic-ock » June 29th, 2010, 2:40 pm

I got lots of stuff to draw, but I'll take some requests!
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Re: Bandwagoning! (You ask=I draw)

Postby Hunterkirizaki » June 30th, 2010, 4:45 pm

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Re: Bandwagoning! (You ask=I draw)

Postby granmastern » July 2nd, 2010, 9:58 am

This is gonna be Awesommme =D (yup, with a capital A)


Ok could you please draw something with Ken of Fist of the north star with Astroboy as his sidekick?
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